Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Making connections


I am learning to make connections between the text and my own experiences to say what i think.

Sometimes it is hard to think of something that is the same as the book. I have to look through my book a couple of times to remind myself.

Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my writing.

The Lost Whale

One night in the sea there was a whale called Bryn. He lost his home. And then he found his home in the middle of sea.

I like adding detail to my writing but sometimes I forget what to write about and then I remember to look at my 5W planner!