I am learning to add some detail to my writing.
The Lost Whale
One
night in the sea there was a whale called Bryn. He lost his home. And then he
found his home in the middle of sea.
I like adding detail to my writing but sometimes I forget what to write about and then I remember to look at my 5W planner!
2 comments:
It's fun seeing you learn to add more detail to your stories, and I bet your brother will love that the whale is named after him. I wonder what colour Bryn the whale is? And if he has any friends? And what his home looks like?
You are trying so hard to add more details to your story.
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