in this activity my task was to retell the rainbow fish.
I found this hard because I had to make my own story.
I have learnt what a retell is.
My next steps are to make a longer retell.
2 comments:
Kelly M
said...
IT can be hard to retell a story in your own words, great job Aiden! Remember your punctuation though, and spaces after full stops make it easier to read your story too. Rainbow Fish is such a lovely story about being kind and sharing too.
2 comments:
IT can be hard to retell a story in your own words, great job Aiden! Remember your punctuation though, and spaces after full stops make it easier to read your story too. Rainbow Fish is such a lovely story about being kind and sharing too.
This was a good retell Aiden, I like that you quoted direct speech to add detail.
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